I Need Some Input

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That's neat............sounds like late 60's -early 70's. Nice guitar sound....vocals are nice also. The drums were a little odd sounding but I'm not sure why. I like the song......reminds me of some early Santana in a way.
Nice work......I'd like the bass to have more definition and the guitar to stand out a bit more....but this is nice.
 
Well, If it isnt MR. PITCH POWER AND RANGE KING!

howzitgoin mate???

Not a bad little song - i really dont think the vocal style fits the music - Music which i enjoyed and was pretty well played.

I agree about the drums - very "small" sounding - maybe a cheap drum kit - altho the cymbals sound ok.

hhahaha - that part at 3:41 musta scared the neighbours!!! haha
whats that - a high B? can you get any higher?

I was suitably impressed despite the elements of cheesy-ness.


y
 
Killer tune my fiend. You have a great voice. I have a few impressions on the mix. First at the beginning the guitar is panned hard to one side and it feels unnatural somehow. Maybe either don't pan it as hard and/or put a delay or reverb on it and return it panned the other way.
There's something about the drums. The kick sounds pinched, maybe over compressed. I'd like them higher in the mix regardless.
Now at 1:14 when the strings come in they kind of swamp the whole mix and take over. I'd back them down some. Man, it seems like I'm ripping you here. It's a good tune and deserves a tweak
:cool:
 
definately feel the 70's classic rock there. I like it. There are some breaks that could be smoother, but it's a cool tune overall!

h2h
 
This is a very involved mix; just listen to those tom-toms move back & forth across the sound stage...

Singin's pretty good. The thing jumping out at me in need of a fix is the sound of the cymbals... the constant crash thing... a bit washy. Also in the first second or so, some hazy hiss type noise is present (sure you hear it, too)... in my very limited experience, that happens either w/EQ boosts, or by just plain bad tracking (or equipment :eek: ) on my part.

If you could figure out which track had that haze to it, it would not only clear up the first second of the intro--but it would clean up the mix a bunch, and give better separation... the haze wouldn't mess with the highs on cymbals, either. (unless you boosted the cymbal's highs :))

Was going to comment on the kick drum... but TR did that... it sounds more like a hip-hop kick with that almost no decay sound.

Not bad... tho the song title & thread title might make people think someone's a bit egotistical :) (joke :D)


Chad
 
What a coincidence

I too am running for president of the United States...but you've got a MUCH cooler theme song :D

Drums are kinda' buried. Vocal's great. I really like the bass fills you're...OH MY GOD?!?!? THAT WAS A SUPER HIGH VOCAL.

Anyway, I like the higher bass stuff you do...but I'm thinking it's pretty mushy in other parts...but then, dammit...at the end, it sounds pretty good.

Okay, I have no idea what I'm talking about, but it doesn't really matter, b/c I'm positive the site won't take this post anyway.

"Tell me, WHO I have to do." - Nice line, my friend.

-nobody
 
Sounds pretty good, I would lose the percussion bit in the middle though...I like the bass lines....singer sounds pretty good
I like the ending chord...
Overall...good effort.
 
cool tune! All sounds pretty good to me. I think IMO the drums are missing some high end shimmer. It seems to me like they were "de-eq'd". The cymbals sound good though!

Your voice is pretty damn strong! Good thing....

Nice one...
RF
 
Aqualung baby ;)

Very "tull" sounding IMO.

When the keys exit and only the guitar is left there's an enormous void left. Think reducing the level of the keys will help with that. Some of the drum/persussion were actually "off", not in time. The rest of the performance sounded right, but the drums/drummer need to get in the pocket or step away from the kit ;).
 
whole lotta fun!


Really nice stereo field. The vocals sound a tad brittle; I would experiment with backing off the high end eq a little.
 
One more thing...

After listening to this track backwards I was able determine your religious affiliation. I am a little offended that I was asked to listen to and evaluate a song that asks the listener to worship satan. Maybe in the future you can post a warning. I've already burned all of the clothes I was wearing when I lstened and now I am shaving off all of the hair on my body...I suggest anyone alse who also listened to this song do the same.

And please tell Sherman Hemsley to stop calling me 20 times a day.

I still like the bass line though......

OW!....I shaved off a nipple.....
 
Yes, but do you realize that Satan spelled backwards is "Natas"??
 
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