I need some feedback on this track.

  • Thread starter Thread starter REEK BROCK
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first impression - a mixtape beat for a few different people that got different styles to get on.

it's not a banger, but it's a beat ya know.


bless.
 
Honestly, I didn't feel it. this track just seemed to lack any sense of life. No disrespect but i think if you liven' it up a little you'd be working with something. Peace and GOD BLESS until next time...
 
haha, reminds me of an old Pigeon John or LA Symphony beat (you can find them on MySpace). what BPM is that beat? i think i'd like it if it was a little more lively. not just the tempo tho... but brighter sounds. i like the additions though. try transposing it up a a few notes. or not, i dont know, just tryin to throw out ideas.

it's getting better


Bless.
 
The reduncancy is sort of like taking tylenol PM's, you gotta get some changes in there man.....Hit'em off with some cymbals, change up that hats, make the bass kick, insert breakdowns, be creative duke!
 
Trumpspade said:
The reduncancy is sort of like taking tylenol PM's, you gotta get some changes in there man.....Hit'em off with some cymbals, change up that hats, make the bass kick, insert breakdowns, be creative duke!
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i know what you mean.When I made those changeups it didnt sound right to me.Thanks for the feed and that'll $2.50 for the tylenol.LOL
 
REEK BROCK said:
i know what you mean.When I made those changeups it didnt sound right to me.Thanks for the feed and that'll $2.50 for the tylenol.LOL
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LOL
Glad you took it constructive homie, 'cause it's all respect -N- being real from me. But, if it was straight garbage, I would have said that! Keep at it, and I hope to hear you in the mainstream circuit one day....

Keep it banging!
 
i think you should get those tom drums outta there and layer some kicks and bass together to creat a good hit and use the tone that feels the most fitting and see how that works
 
DesertEase said:
i think you should get those tom drums outta there and layer some kicks and bass together to creat a good hit and use the tone that feels the most fitting and see how that works
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The toms you talking about was the foundation of the track.I know some people don't like them.It ws a stretch.Its like an old school crew track.Thats why its kind of repetitive.I really like it personally.I'm surprised at this kinda.
 
it's a good beat i'm just sayin that from the first listen the toms really stood out and maybe to try another approach for drums thas all
 
It seems like it might be chopped a tad bit early. I don't know if you sampled it or just overlapped it too much, but it cuts off a milli too soon.....
 
I have no critisim for you Reek but I can definatley nod my head to this joint
 
Yo disregard my reponse to this post, I was listening to a total different beat. My laptop was double clicking.............I like it! Drums are sweet!
The battle cut is the cut I think is a milli off......I have listened to so many beats today, I am hearing kicks in my sleep......... Forgive me Fam!
 
its coo man...

i think think you could add some swing to the drums and maybe fill in some gaps cause it doesnt have as full of a sound as id like?

regardless it doesnt stand out to me as much as your other stuff
 
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