I made this for a girl I know as a sort of apology. I need it to turn out good.

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I made it for someone very dear to me so I want it to turn out good. Please tell me what you think, what needs to be changed, added, subtracted, effected, whatever.. I'd really appreciate the help.

If it needs to be reworked and reworked so be it.


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Nice tune

I had a bit of trouble making out the words. The lead passages had me reaching for the volume control because the guitars were clipping in both channels. so unfortunately I couldn't listen too close to the rest since the volume was down.

I liked the song, it had a nice easy going flow to it.
 
Ok first off, nice song. The kick gets a bit too complicated for this song. It fits during the lead but I sould avoid that in the rest of the song. The guitar seems kinda of dull and muddy, is that a flanger on it? the high hat sounds a bit artifical as far as the pattern goes. This song could do with a bit of cut in the 300-400 range on the two track.
I would really try to get the kick and bass leading notes to gel by simplifing the kick pattern.
Great lead sound and a nice song.
Chicks don't care about those little details just knowing that you wrote this for her will get her wet.

I hope Marie isn't your granny.:eek:
 
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