I Hate Myseif

[Irwin abrigo]

hi everyone,
this is my first song here, title 'I Hate myself'. please review.

www.soundclick.com/Irwindemo



When page show up;

click on 'music'

Then click on 'lo fi'

And then the song will begin playing.


Irwin Abrigo
songwriter

 

[RAMI]

I just listened....Now I hate you too.


Just joking....It's actually a good tune. Believe it or, I hear some Alice Cooper in your voice. Nice song.

 

[bigmahon]

Irwin, I really like the song! Lyrics are a bit moody , but I don't mind that at all. The tune has a real nice flow to it, and the vocals sound great! Some of the instruments sound a bit thin to my ears though. This could be my laptop speakers combined with years of Marshall and Hiwatt damage though.

Looking forward to hearing more!

Chris

 

[B.SABBATH]

pretty cool song.. I like the title..

this song sounds like the music wants to be a lot heavier than the 80's synthy rhythm that drives it now.. the vocals jump out in spots volume wise.. maybe clipping too..

 

[Hugo H]

This is very good. Congrats - I want to hear more (but you knew that)

 

[Irwin abrigo]

RAMI,
I hate you too! LOL
Thanks for your compliments. First time someone has mentioned Alice
Cooper but I can hear that now too.

bigmahon,
Thanks! I like the contrast between the words and the music. You are
right about the instruments, they sound a little bit thin in this demo.
I'll work on it!

B.Sabbath,
I'll have a look at the clipping you might be hearing. As far as the
music goes, I was trying to keep it light so it wouldn't be too heavy.
Just my style. Thanks for liking it!

Hugo,
Thank you.

 

[SnakeDog5050]

Hey cool song, I dig the intro and instrumentation. It's groovy and catchy tune. I agree that the overall tune sounds like it would sound cool thicker or heavier. Maybe thicken up the drum sound some and widen the stereo field with some panning and double tracking instruments... then add extreme power chords to really punctuate certain sections. hehe, just some thoughts. Good tune

 

[chugheshc]

i hear the alice cooper thing too.
that aside, imho (drums are fake right?) real drums
would be a big jump up and I'd could see a heavier snare sound, and a little too much reverb at times.
*disclaimer* - I'm on pc speakers at work, so bass I can't comment on.
like the song though, vocals are quite nice.
cheers
C.