I Am Assured

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Monkey Allen

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It's a bit long. I have a demo with music and the singing. It's just EAB. No chorus or anything like that.


Oh it don't matter what I've done
Oh the Lord, I am his son
He gonna protect me I am assured
When he takes me from his world

Though I'm a criminal to his word
I never beseeched him for his support
He's gonna take my black old heart
And make me a good man when I depart

Oh here's to you Lord when you take my hand
And here's to you Lord and your promised land
I done so bad here couldn't find my way
But I know you'll forgive me anyway

So I tip my lid Lord I believe in my soul
You've set a plan for every boy and girl
For the good ones for the bad as well
Oh I'll be glad Lord when you take me from hell

Oh god almighty I am his son
Oh god almighty loves everyone
We're all the same right? Lord aint that true?
And the root of all evil is someone like you

Oh what's the cause Lord of suffering and pain?
Is your old foe at it again
Or is it families and how they grow
Or is it confusion and population growth?

Oh I give up Lord it's not for me to see
I'll just take it easy by my TV
My brain is hurting but it just needs to know
I got your protection when I go
 
I like it. I'm not really a man of faith but I have contemplated those very ideas. Are you going to post your demo somewhere?



Violent5
 
I'm not a man of faith either. I should post the demo shortly
 
It sounds like it was a heck of a lot of fun playing/recording it. I also had to have a listen to "Julia" because I love that song. I really enjoyed your cover of the tune. Nice job.


Violent5
 
Hey, thanks a lot. Always awesome when someone enjoys your stuff!
 
Been a bit absent from the songwriting forum lately but no time like the present.....

This is a cool song Mr Allen, the intro and outro give it a truly live feeling...nice touch....

This could be a very popular folk? - type song... one sung by many people around the globe over a beer or two. It is simple and catchy with good lyrics.

Recording is very nice vocals and guitar....

:D :) :D :)
 
I'm a big fan of your comments idol957!

It's a tongue in cheek song I think, and one day I plan to record it again.

Thanks for you thoughts

:D
 
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