How's this mix sound?

[Daniel | Davis]

http://www.sendspace.com/file/iiqwp2

It's a clip from a song I'm working on that's over 10 minutes, actually. I only posted this 30 second clip just to see if I'm on the right track. This clip also is at a point within the song that most of the instruments are playing at the same time. I'm just trying to see if this mix isn't too hurtful on the ears, especially for a newbie like me. Let me know what you think!

 

[Rokket]

Even if it's a 30 second demo, post this in the mp3 clinic. That's what it's there for.

 

[The Green Hornet]

Yo Dave/Dan


Nice catchy tune. I do quite a bit of that type of music.

The "flutes" or whatever that type, need to kick ass a bit. The rhythm is fine but it overpowers the flutes or whatever sound it is.

I like it.

Green Hornet

 

[Daniel | Davis]

Even if it's a 30 second demo, post this in the mp3 clinic. That's what it's there for.

Hm, alrighty. I figured that if I did that I would just be redirected to here, because I'd have no idea how to explain what I did/should do and would just be told to ask it in the Newbies section anyway!

edit: moved!