The video gave me a seizure. The meter of the vocal doesn't match the rhythm from the kick too well. I'd throw some kick hits in that are missing, it seems. This has the feel of a vocal pasted onto a music track...like the vocal doesn't fit into the mix very well, although it is mixed decently on its own, it just doesn't glue to the track nicely.
The "get rid of the FX" section didn't seem too different from the FX section. I didn't hear enough of a contrast there for it to work. Just my opinion.