they have good points...
monotone - of course, i was. the way i look at it, the first step is feeling the beat and getting your lyrics to flow with it. without that, you can forget it. so my first cd's were a little monotone, but the flow was good (well, as good as it gets for the first few recordings).
AFTER you get down your flow, THEN work on delivery. idealy you should work on both, and if you have someone recording with you, or at least recording you, that helps because then they can say "do it like this here, and drop that word there".... but that's my advice.
oh yeah - recording w/ Adobe Audition 1.5... i only record one track for the verses. i'll just record and record and record until i get it the way i want. then the adlibs/doubles are one track per verse. choruses can be anywhere from 2 to 5 or 6 tracks and panned... i'll give an example of a song i've recorded lately:
Verses: One track. dead center or right 5
Backups/Adlibs: one track. left 20-30, sometimes reverbed, not usually.
Chorus: one track. dead center or right 5
Chorus extras/adlibs/backups: 2-4 tracks, panned accordingly to add depth (maybe 2 to the right, 20 and 65, 2 to the left @ 30 and 80, and maybe some additional vocals lowered to sound faint panned right 10)
eh - i've been using the same program (CoolEdit/AA) for all the times i've recorded. so that gives me about 6 years with the same program. still cant say i'm anywhere near a pro at it....
give it a listen:
www.myspace.com/billybomusic
EDIT - i actually rerecorded "Movement" and "One King" on that site, so i'll have to remember to put those on, but still, tell me what you think.
Bless.