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TheMusic
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Hey all,
I just wrote this tonight, in about half an hour, out of frustration of my present situation. It's not polished or anything, and I have no real experience writing songs, but tell me what you think:
Mine Again
I’m so tired this day
Tired beyond my means
I try to get you
And it almost works, it seems
I knew in my heart
The agonies I would face from the very start
But now feeling them for the millionth time
I can’t hold on, it’s just too steep a climb
The pain has resided
The melancholy blue
Presiding in my dark thoughts
Drowning in you
Prisoner of a doubt
It seems I will never be without
I will linger here forever
Slave of this eternal tether
Never knowing, never showing
My feelings for you, your feelings for me
And you cannot hear my desperate plea
Echoing as you are going
Far away from where I lay
Broken and helpless, to where I dare not stray
I wonder if you are aware
That what you do to me
Is a burden I can no longer bear
All I ask is to know your heart
The question I should have asked from the very start
All I need to know
The answer to end this sorrow
Break my heart if you must
Shatter my dreams if you need be
For when I gave you my heart to entrust
I never expected you to turn around and flee
Bearing with you my love
My soul, like the wandering dove
Leaving this empty hole
The wounds will heal in time
And though I cannot imagine it now
I will be made whole again, someday, somehow
So it is for you that I write this rhyme
And it is for you that I cry these tears
You were never really there to allay these fears
And as I wonder what could have been
I see my heart within
Broken as it may be
I thank you for giving it back to me
It is mine again
Free to heal and mourn
And though we will never see
What could have been…you and me
I feel free to wave goodbye
On our divergent destinies…
Tell me what you all think!
I just wrote this tonight, in about half an hour, out of frustration of my present situation. It's not polished or anything, and I have no real experience writing songs, but tell me what you think:
Mine Again
I’m so tired this day
Tired beyond my means
I try to get you
And it almost works, it seems
I knew in my heart
The agonies I would face from the very start
But now feeling them for the millionth time
I can’t hold on, it’s just too steep a climb
The pain has resided
The melancholy blue
Presiding in my dark thoughts
Drowning in you
Prisoner of a doubt
It seems I will never be without
I will linger here forever
Slave of this eternal tether
Never knowing, never showing
My feelings for you, your feelings for me
And you cannot hear my desperate plea
Echoing as you are going
Far away from where I lay
Broken and helpless, to where I dare not stray
I wonder if you are aware
That what you do to me
Is a burden I can no longer bear
All I ask is to know your heart
The question I should have asked from the very start
All I need to know
The answer to end this sorrow
Break my heart if you must
Shatter my dreams if you need be
For when I gave you my heart to entrust
I never expected you to turn around and flee
Bearing with you my love
My soul, like the wandering dove
Leaving this empty hole
The wounds will heal in time
And though I cannot imagine it now
I will be made whole again, someday, somehow
So it is for you that I write this rhyme
And it is for you that I cry these tears
You were never really there to allay these fears
And as I wonder what could have been
I see my heart within
Broken as it may be
I thank you for giving it back to me
It is mine again
Free to heal and mourn
And though we will never see
What could have been…you and me
I feel free to wave goodbye
On our divergent destinies…
Tell me what you all think!