How does my song sound so far?

[jenerally]

This is just the chorus and I've had the tune stuck in my head for about a month now but I only had the opportunity to get it out now.. I used guitar just for the chords but I would rather it be with piano and drums
anyway..
Here it is
https://soundcloud.com/jennifer-doll-8169456/inappropriate
What do you think? thank you!

 

[Robus]

Yeah, keep going with it. There's a solid chord progression, a good melody, and a lyrical idea: Those are the makings of a song. Sounds like what you have could stand as a verse. Now you just need chorus and a change up (or if what you have is a chorus, then verse and a change up).

 

[Jessica_X]

I love the sound of your voice...I really like that girlish, delicate tone. I think you've got a really good start here...keep going!