How do you think that my cover song is doing compared to its original?

[Renflexx]

So, im making a cover song, and i did everything from scratch on logic pro X with Komplete 10.
It's still not over although i already have all the instrumental but im having some hard time with the vocals, and i want to know what do you think of the mix so far.
I'll leave it down below so you guys can hear and give me your feedback
Thank you
View attachment mix2.mp3
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[Dicus]

Maybe rather post this in MP3 Mixing Clinic, thats the place to put your mixes for general feedback . This subforum is more for specific questions on specific mixing topics. (if I understood it well myself, I am no moderator or anything