House Track - Looking for feedback

[dgrswe]

Hello! I recently joined a contest were you hade to remix a track, so i made a house remix of it! i didnt recive any feedback from them so i have now decided to send it here for feedback! i've just turned 15, but please dont hesitate to give me critism, my only way to get better is to recive it! Thanks! / Erik

 

[JAPOV]

Overall, it seems I've heard this one before lol, all the usual rave trix. But, if you're only 15, you're certainly on your way to something
I'd give that kick more punch and less sub.
Also, pull back the gain on your VOX. I hear no reason to hide behind all those efx.