Hi.....and welcome to the forum! So....it sounds like you have a voice that can work and do some good vocals. As well.......it's obvious that you're not an experienced singer and you have all the traits of someone who's just beginning to explore his talent.
To start with......you could work on your voice "projection". In a sense.....you're sort of singing only from your throat it seems............and that's not going to put the sound or dynamics that you want into your performance. That's a very common beginners' mistake. Your tempo and meter are actually very good.......with only an occasional timing issue. Practice will cure that. So...keep recording yourself and do your best to listen back to your results with an unbiased ear. The more you hear the more you can improve. Your voice tone is very nice.....so you have lots to work with. Go for it.
