Hot new RnB / POP song!! please critique

[defconcepts]

This song was written by our writer in MI and The Track was done by us here in Connecticut. We send her the track , she demos it out , sends us back the vocals and BOOM!!....We have a song...thats not easy to mix!!..anyway please go to our website and check it out. Its the first song in the MP3 section called "you make me wanna"
feedback is appreciated

 

[jake-owa]

Whoa, fuggin slick!

Nice website. I am not qalified in these cans to really get into this. I would say it could use a hell of a lot more bass. I think you may have some bass issues in your monitor environment but I could be way off here. Maybe you have some sub shit that I am not picking up on here.

 

[scrubs]

There is some bass there, but it could definitely stand some more. Not that it sounds bad now. It's just a function of the style. Actually really dig you guys' work (listened to clubbin again while I was at the site). The lead vocal sounds a little harsh/crispy for my taste, but it definitely cuts through. Strong effort!

 

[defconcepts]

There is some bass there, but it could definitely stand some more. Not that it sounds bad now. It's just a function of the style. Actually really dig you guys' work (listened to clubbin again while I was at the site). The lead vocal sounds a little harsh/crispy for my taste, but it definitely cuts through. Strong effort!

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[pattygram]

great song, the one beat box is way to crispy, and a bit to loud, wheres the low end, r&b without a pumpin bass......... try soloing the vox and percusion, boxes together for a smoother overall level, now the + your almost there......