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brettbuc
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Please let me know how this track sounds to you: Independence day (work in progress) by Brett Buchanan on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Thanks!!!
Thanks!!!
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Bisson820
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kick is almost non existent, snare needs more crack and body.
the mix is in big need of some proper EQ and compression.
I really like the song and your style tho. kinda reminds me of cold play/u2
also the piano riff would sound nice in the right ear to me
edit - not a fan of the rap part
the mix is in big need of some proper EQ and compression.
I really like the song and your style tho. kinda reminds me of cold play/u2
also the piano riff would sound nice in the right ear to me
edit - not a fan of the rap part
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brettbuc
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kick is almost non existent, snare needs more crack and body.
the mix is in big need of some proper EQ and compression.
I really like the song and your style tho. kinda reminds me of cold play/u2
also the piano riff would sound nice in the right ear to me
edit - not a fan of the rap part
Great feedback!! Thanks man!
Clam Soup
Project 49
I agree - it's all upper frequencies. You need to fill the bottom end of the song with deeper drum heads - kick and toms. You can probably fill some bass lines with that keyboard too.
Very nice song all in all.... just really trapped in that high end.
Very nice song all in all.... just really trapped in that high end.
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brettbuc
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How does this version sound? I replaced the "rap". Not sure what I was thinking with that....just got caught up in the moment, I guess! LOL!
Independence day NO RAP by Brett Buchanan on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Independence day NO RAP by Brett Buchanan on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
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TripleM
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Sounds OK.
I think you need to bring down the instruments or bring the vocal up. It's tough to hear the vocal. I also wonder if a little low mid boost to the vocal might sound nice. Like around 250h - 300hz or so.
The mix is kind of narrow. Not terribly narrow, but a bit. The drums seem down the center, as do the keyboard parts.
Seems like a general buildup in the 500hz - 800hz range. A lot of that is in the drums I think.
I think you need to bring down the instruments or bring the vocal up. It's tough to hear the vocal. I also wonder if a little low mid boost to the vocal might sound nice. Like around 250h - 300hz or so.
The mix is kind of narrow. Not terribly narrow, but a bit. The drums seem down the center, as do the keyboard parts.
Seems like a general buildup in the 500hz - 800hz range. A lot of that is in the drums I think.
karumba
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hm...this mix has some serious problems. you should check your monitoring/acoustics.
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brettbuc
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Clam Soup
Project 49
The drums still sound too "sha sha sha sha-ee" They need to register lower in tone/frequency for some meat.
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brettbuc
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ok...THIS? (pulling my hair out! recording is hard!) Independence day NOV 23 by Brett Buchanan on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
kcearl
I see deaf people
its meant to be hard
you may want to change the link in your first post as it comes up like theres nothing there
so great song, contemporary and a bit retro too
Im afraid Id have to repeat again that theres still some meat missing from the mix...its just a little washy/light like your voice is the anchor rather than the bass or kick
you need to get this right as the track has lots of potential..Im more electronically inclined so not sure where youd be looking at..but Id start with Kick/Bass/vocals then mix the rest in...tame the HFs as theres a lot of sizzles from the snare to go along with other effects
very nice tune though...good job
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brettbuc
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I'm about to puke. Ok, how's this?? Independence day NOV 24 by Brett Buchanan on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Thanks for all the help, by the way!
Thanks for all the help, by the way!
