I'm not an expert, but it seems everything is pushed to the edge of distortion. The sound is definately 'edgey'. Listen to the cymbals - they sound really brittle. The bass and kick drum are almost all snap, no body. The snare too... it's got pop, but there's nothing behind it. The whole mix needs more 'fullness', a more natural, less synthetic sound.
On the plus side, the vocal sound is very good - clear, present not too close. The instrumental performance is also good.