Myx62 - good idea for the outro.. thanks man
mixmkr - hey mix, I started the mix from the ground up again.. I can only mix 6 tracks at a time, so I just started building it up again until it was done.. it sounds very close to the original, I am surprised the difference is even audible, but Lt. Bob noticed a difference too.. cool! BTW, I'm just glad you comment.. If you hear anything really wrong, I hope you would let me know.. thanks d00d!
participant- hey Chad, what a difference not holding the mic makes.. I still can't believe it.. someone should have said something earlier, and I think you tried to.. the whole vocal things had me down because I was able to pick out flaws in everyone elses recording, but couldn't get my own in check.. I still can't, but it's getting better from here on in.. thanks man.. Still waiting for some new tunes from you!
Lt. Bob - hey Steve, cool! As I was telling mixmkr, I started the mix from the ground up.. I can only mix 6 tracks at a time, so I just kept building.. I may have altered some of the levels in the process.. man, I should have started holding the mic a long time ago.. I can really hear how bad all the other vocals sound now.. thanks for checking in Steve!
WATYF - forgot to tell you I almost peed in my pants when I saw your avatar and location! 'just skippin along, singin a song!' that really is perfect for you!

thanks for checking it out.. I wonder what WATYF means?
Freudian Slip - very cool to hear that at least something in my life improved a little.. I'm still trying to nail the vocal sound, so all suggestions were appreciated.. thanks!
Kramer - funny you should mention the SR-16.. I used it with a Roland TD-8 sound module.. I put the beats together with the SR-16, but play the sounds from the Roland.. Your last tune was killer, so I would say you are more than qualified to rip apart anyone within ear shot!

thanks for the positive word Krametorrie!
joro - el joro, yeah man, I was going for the run out of tape/time type ending.. kinda like a movie that didnt end neatly..

It does need something.. maybe I'll have a long fade out or something.. thanks man!
dtb - very good points you bring up about the hands
free style!

all extra bonuses.. thanks Dan!
Tim Brown - Sabotage is probably my favorite Sabbath album of all time.. (next to the first one) very cool! thanks man!
thanks again guys!