HArd Rock - "Shallow"

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queepy

aka Variaxman
Here is one I am working on with my buddy who wrote the lyrics...just has a basic drum track...no fills or anything.Trying for a pretty loud aggressive mix with some decent low end.Any mix thoughts,or any critiques in general are much appreciated!


Shallow
 
Had to download the song for it to work, not run it.

Anyway, does sound like it has a lot on the low end.. I think everything is sitting pretty well right now. Of course, what credibility do I have though. I'm sort of new to this. Maybe vocals could be brought up a little bit. The double vocalism sounds pretty good.. nice solo

-Austin
 
Good start man. More ooommpphh to the vocals...bring them up, or sing with a bit more aggression...this song could use it. Cut loose and have a blast with the vocals. Cool solo man. And nice bass tone. Work on the vox some more...the delivery. You're being too clean on this one. :D
 
austinmo8 - Thanks for checking it out...I will be recutting the vocals and will try to get em' out there more in the mix.

dogman - yeah, it's weird...I'm normally vocally pretty timid,and its even worse when I didnt write the lyrics..I definitely envision a much more aggressive vocal and will go for it when I retrack the vocals.Thanks for the feedback!
 
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