You mean the link in your signature? Happy ending? You might want to link it in your original post to avoid ambiguity.
The big mix critique that I have is that the vocals don't really sit in the mix. They're sticking way out. This makes them really coherent, which is good, but it means the mix doesn't really sound like a band. More like karaoke. This is especially true with punk, where the vocals aren't really the strong point.
Your backup vocalist in "Small Time" is terrible. She's pitchy, and off time. This is emphasized by the double-tracked vocals. If you're going to double-track an instrument, both takes have to be really in time with each other.
The tone of your instruments is pretty good, and they're balanced well with each other, but the fact that the tone pretty much never changes gets tedious. This is kinda repetitive even for punk.
I like the fact that the songs are all 90 seconds long so that by the time I've finished writing my thoughts on one song, the next one starts, and with it new critiques!
