happy new year

[dobro]

Got it. Thank you.

My only defense is that it's pop music and all rules are off. That, and I don't know what I'm doing.

 

[jonny deep]

I was listening to the first version and was going to comment on how the vocal and guitar felt out of tune at the 'I thought you'd gone' part, sounded like the guitar string was bending, but not quite enough - was the whole guitar part out?

Listening to the second version now. Lt. Bob is a sexy motherf***er! This sounds great to me - can't offer any suggestions, but it sure sounds slinky.