Had fun with this project.

[QuezRoe]

I basically wanted to be as ignorant as I possibly could haha.
Hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it.
I'm still new to mixing and the like, so any feedback as far as the mixing goes would be appreciated even more.

 

[killthepixelnow]

The background melody fits the genre, but it could use some more variations. On the vocals, I think that I heard some out of tune phrases. Besides that, outstanding gangsta rappers like Freddie Gibbs are masters on creating long complex lines. These chops vary on speed, emphasis, and even pitch, which is something difficult to achieve. In this song, the singer hasn't achieved that effect.

That's my two cents.

 

[QuezRoe]

Thanks you for the really in depth feedback. Really appreciate it.
I'm still working at it haha. It's a journey.

The background melody fits the genre, but it could use some more variations. On the vocals, I think that I heard some out of tune phrases. Besides that, outstanding gangsta rappers like Freddie Gibbs are masters on creating long complex lines. These chops vary on speed, emphasis, and even pitch, which is something difficult to achieve. In this song, the singer hasn't achieved that effect.

That's my two cents.