Great Pop tune. Care to review?

[flapo1]

Hey guys, this is a new song from our record "Clouds falling", this is a catchy tune and I would like some input specialy in the recording matter.

Thanks.

URL:
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/4/1251/

Thanks.

 

[flapo1]

Am I repeating words or phrases?

I am certainly repating phrases or words, am I?

Thanks

Thanks

Thanks

 

[flapo1]

Come on, just do one review!

Anyone?