Giving feedback to my first "track"

[Boaz_W]

Hey there,

5 months ago I buyed FL Studio. With a lot of youtube video's and tips and tricks from other people did I made this track. And now I would like to get some advice/opinion from other people about my first track I made.

Already thank you for commenting!

Here is the MP3:

 

[Slouching Raymond]

It has something about it.
I hear this stuff as music to Youtube clips all the time.
Those speeding drums here and there are a bit harsh on the ear.
It is largely the same chord sequence repeated, but with some nice decoration in different voices.
I'm wanting it to develop away from that sequence, for interest, then maybe come back.

 

[markmann]

Very energetic and you did a good job of building and then subtracting elements. I completely agree with @Slouching Raymond about the drum bits sounding harsh. I would find a way to totally remove that.