listened to the whole thing, but it's really the same thing all the way through--no changes, breaks, etc. needs additional music, in my opinion. i thought the sample of 'rock the boat' was ok, but you didn't continue it or expound on it further... and i don't know what happened there at the end--just a few drum beats between long silent intervals....????
keep it up, but for now, you're way too repetitive.
i see your in montreal, by the way--i'm in the eastern townships...
take care & good luck,
ZIM