The lyrics I can´t say much about as I cant hear whats sung?
Keep on making music. Right now it ain´t brilliant.
Consider it as a stage. If you were 14 in 2003 when you joined this forum it means that you are 16 now, and boy - then you got a future. I was 33 when I started playing.
Keep it up. Your timing and your recording skills will grow on you.
So will your voice.
Keep it up. Nuf said.