Give it all Away

[JodyRae]

Here's another tune for you to trash. This is not a band tune!!! This is my own personal s---t.
Give it all Away
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/coldcomfortusmusic.htm

 

[Pinky]

The distortion on the lead vocal is a tad annoying (needs to be compressed more ?). Like the effect idea though. The clean acoustic adds a nice element and texture to the track. The brief sound bites are a little over-driven as well. More compression?

I enjoyed the recording overall, pretty original sounding. A combination of Pink Floyd "Wall" and early Moody Blues if they did the same drugs the Beatles did while listening to Beck's latest acoustic rag.

I'm into the alt/indie thing. May never sell a million copies, but you'll find fans with this type of sound.

 

[JodyRae]

Jeez!

Jeez, some actual constructive critisism. Thank you very much! I do agree that I should have compressed. I did the vox this evening in a bit of a rush. Thanks for taking the time, and for the suggestions. Peace-J.R.