"Gargoyle" Please critque

[Greykitkat36]

This is my first song mixed and recorded. Tell me what you think.
copy and paste into your adress bar
C:\Documents and Settings\Administrator\My Documents\downloads\Dark Rode- Gargoyle3.wav

 

[the_supercritic]

is anybody really this stupid?

 

[DigitalSmigital]

Now, see here...

Don't call her stupid. She is very...innocent in the ways of this world. Certainly GreyKitKat needs some guidance, and I nominate this rude SuperCritic to help her navigate through this problem.

Go ahead, she is smart enough to understand. I dare you to show your patience and intelligence, if you have any of these qualities.

 

[Greykitkat36]

Re: Now, see here...

Don't call her stupid. She is very...innocent in the ways of this world. Certainly GreyKitKat needs some guidance, and I nominate this rude SuperCritic to help her navigate through this problem.

Go ahead, she is smart enough to understand. I dare you to show your patience and intelligence, if you have any of these qualities.

First off, Im a guy, second of all, I know you cant downloada file from my C drive. I will have it up on garageband.com tommarow. Ill repost the link then.