Frame:777, The Angels Return.

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So heres another... i had a little help from too angels who came back too sing the last part for me. Edit: all "respect" and thanks too radio shack for allowing me too by a mic for $15; fair warning haha. So please for the love of all that is audible, headphones.
 

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The lyrics are
Hello I know I've been away and yes I went astray.
From you who knew my red and blue and the swirl between which is my view.
Into this this haze that hell my dream; you always seemed too come with me.

And if we never again embrace, never again share the same space,
I wish you some other smiling face, too hold your hand until you wake.

And if today is my last day please be the light at the end of my way.
And if your not gone by the end of my song; Ill be the light when you move on.

Elanor, Elanor!
Why so low? And Father why cover your toes so? Rest.

Your hands are tired. How much longer can you hold that fire?
Tears could never snuff that pain, let me hold for while our hair turns grey.
I will pinch your cigarets ember; my fingers have been numb...
since I was very young.
 
I like the lyrics of this one a lot. There's some really nice imagery and sentiment going on.

Sorry ... a little aside here ... this has been bugging me because I keep seeing it consistently in your posts. It's spelled "to" when using the preposition form---as in, "I went to the store," etc. It's the adverb form that's spelled "too" --- as in, "I'm too tired to do this right now" or "He's coming to the store too." (Actually, "to" can be an adverb as well, but it's much less common than the preposition form--- "I pulled the door to" is an example of the adverb "to".)

Anyway, the music sounds nice too, but it's more difficult to judge those aspects because the performance is a bit loosey goosey.
 
Ya I have sever adhd, which was untreated till i was 19 because i was able to lie and write :) papers well enough with out reading the books i only ever had one teacher notice what i was doing. and she read my paper allowed in class and said i know you didn't actually read this but you wrote a better paper then anyone one else so you get an A. Im a fast talker with just the right words and i don't give a shit haha the perfect combination. Respect and love for all opinions and listens for now im off, by the way your disability is your ammunition. peace.
 
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