Formal apology and new track

[BEATMAKERS]

I would like to take this time to apologize to any and all individuals who i may have offended and or pissed of in 2003 with my attitude or misleading and some times even confrontational post.I would also like to take this time to apologize in advance to all the people i know for sure i am going to piss off in 2004. With that said lets get to the music.

NEW TRACK CALLED TWO
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/darealbeatmakerzmusic.htm

Could be my hottest one yet. you be the judge

constructive critiques welcomed, Haters discouraged

Motto fo 04 = Try to be mo humble but know you gone slip some times

 

[BEATMAKERS]

46 views and no replies whed is da love??????

 

[Taylor Made]

hmmmmmmmmm...

diggin' this beat.......good vibe to it
not to keen on quality, but sounds good
can definitly party to this track (wit tha rite vocals)
nice ish....keep it up dawg

 

[moroccog]

Constructive Criticism for '04:

OK, the track sounds good but I think it keeps you waiting too long before it develops. You got a smooth melody going so if your drums and snares, hi-hats, etc. were stronger and came in earlier the beat would bang harder.

The Final Verdict:

For fifty a beat you definitely got some work on the blocks. I might hit you up for a beat.

 

[Hi_D_Ho_Man]

Good Work Cuzzin

Thats one of my favorite ol skool snare sounds. that flute arp thing is crazy dawg.

only thing i'd add is maybe a slight reverb on the piano hits on every 1st and 3 rd beat. or better yet back it with a reverbed hit and pull that in and out occasionally.

Hot shit man, keep it coming!