I remember your original take of this song. In fact I have is saved somewhere. I like the updated version vey much. The vocals are clearer sounding and easier to hear and the guitar work is great!
I'm getting this a little on a laptop with crap earbuds... it's in the bgvs at the end of the chorus under the drawn-out "meeeeeeaaaaaaaan". It's slight and I think I only notice it cuz the harmonies are so lush and have such a great spread. Really great mix and performances over all, though. Loved the lyrics and arrangement. Guitars sound good.