Folky Goodness

[Acousticles]

So, my friend (the female vocalist in the song) wrote the lyrics for this and I wrote the music (my brother wrote the mandolin part).

I've got it somewhat mixed, but am at a point where I think something is off...but I can't quite tell what.

Lemme know what you guys think

 

[undrgrnd studio]

Love when the bass makes it's appearance. Fills up the tune so wonderfully. I wonder, is it necessary to double or triple the vocals on every line? There's something to be said for variety. Excellent little ending riff too. Great job!