Flying In The Sky, electro pop(I think)

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Your sounds have got better since the early days. I always found your lead synths cheesy sounding. These sound pretty good. Melodically you would do better to resist some of those quick and easy resolutions. I like the groove. It moves pretty well.
 
Robus said:
Your sounds have got better since the early days. I always found your lead synths cheesy sounding. These sound pretty good. Melodically you would do better to resist some of those quick and easy resolutions. I like the groove. It moves pretty well.
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Thank you for commenting. I admit I have a habit of trying to do my stuff too quickly and then stuff like this happens. I will try to improve it but I can't make any promises
 
I like it. You said it began as a Christmas song. I wrote a first verse and a chorus for the beginning but the latter part od the song changes a bit so I stopped at that since I didn't know if you would even like it.

Verse

I guess I get nothing for Christmas this year
I think I must have been bad
I heard the Rein-deer over my house last night
I hoped they’d stop but they went on by

Chorus

I sat alone night before Christmas
Thinking of things that I did wrong
Did I act badly Was I so bad
To go without again this year
 
Flying In The sky

Slacker G said:
I like it. You said it began as a Christmas song. I wrote a first verse and a chorus for the beginning but the latter part od the song changes a bit so I stopped at that since I didn't know if you would even like it.

Verse

I guess I get nothing for Christmas this year
I think I must have been bad
I heard the Rein-deer over my house last night
I hoped they’d stop but they went on by

Chorus

I sat alone night before Christmas
Thinking of things that I did wrong
Did I act badly Was I so bad
To go without again this year
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Thank you for the comment and the lyrics
 
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