First of all, I think you should reshoot video of the guitarist(s).
For unknown reasons, their faces are cut and all we can see is just headless bodies holding guitars.
Thats should be changed.
The singer's face is always shown in one angle. That should be changed (front, sides, etc). Its also almost like from behind. Thats not comfortable angle.
This is a great track, and I enjoyed listening to it . . . a lot!
The video was ok. I kind of get the quirky headless guitar players . . . but like Stonejack, I would prefer to see the heads attached. Daryl mentioned that 3/4 through it became more human. That's because we saw more than just strumming (or picking).
The editing was tight and snappy, but in the end, it was a series of images that repeated themselves.
Well.. I do all the parts including vocals, and I guess the original concept was that my face wouldn't be seen at all... Like the person performing it is a mystery, instead of "ewww it's some middle age creepy guy!"