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Dave46239
New member
The guitar is pretty good. The intro riff/hook is catchy, and I like how you elaborate on it during the first solo. The tone on the lead guitar is also good; kind of reminds me of Bob Seger.
Personally, I think the lyrics are too generic. It sounds like you're singing to someone, but I can't tell who or why.
Hope this helps,
David
Personally, I think the lyrics are too generic. It sounds like you're singing to someone, but I can't tell who or why.
Hope this helps,
David
dragonworks
Banned
I wrote the lyrics generically on purpose.
ido1957
9K Gold Member
The lead is so southern it could be a Betts playing a 335 
I like this one better than the last tune of yours (writing/arrangement wise) but they are both great.
I think it's the keys adding something je ne sais quoi to the mix...
Catchy chorus - hung with me as I typed this after listening.
I like this one better than the last tune of yours (writing/arrangement wise) but they are both great.
I think it's the keys adding something je ne sais quoi to the mix...
Catchy chorus - hung with me as I typed this after listening.
