first go with this tune

[Dr_simon]

http://homepage.mac.com/dr_simon_richardson/FileSharing3.html

This is a long way from finished.

The tracking still needs tweaking
The EQ needs sorting, the bass comes and goes a bit and the drums need tightening up.

May also add some backing vox and the cymbals are noticeably absent !

I'd welcome any constructive feed back.

 

[HomerFlintstone]

Hey nice Jazzy tune it reminds me of some of the pop/jazzy stuff
David Bowie was doing before he was famous.The vocals are
a little dry they don't need much ,but maybe a little ambience.Is
there a Bass guitar in the mix?I couldn't hear one ,could be my
pc speakers.The guitars sound pretty good nice playing.

Cheers,
B

 

[Dr_simon]

thanks mate !

I have subsequently tightened up the drums and will probably sort the EQ out this weekend.