Finish this line:

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Rokket

Trailing Behind Again
You fill my desire or

You're the one I desire or

whatever....





It's a line written into almost every love song in one form or another. The cliche' is to rhyme it with a line that ends in "Fire".

See if you can come up with something original. Let me know how you would finish this off and avoid the cliche. I am not trying to write this as a song, just want to challenge you a bit.
 
Your children I will sire
I hear an angel choir
Lift me from this mire
The situation's dire
Are you for hire?
I'm no liar
(Doors used pyre)
like an electric wire
Like hobbits in the shire

I'll need the rhyming dictionary to get the two and three syllable words...
 
help me strip this wire
put these wings into the frier
your Porsche I do admire
 
thane1200 said:
help me strip this wire
put these wings into the frier
your Porsche I do admire
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Girl you got that fire
come and burn me up
let me curess your body
while you lick my....

Opps :D
 
I need a set of pliers
I fell into the deep fat frier
On Ebay...I'm a buyer...
 
Baby you know you're the one I desire
I'm like a bird on a wire and jump into the fire
Of the passions that you conspire
To take our loving even higher.


Okay...I'll stop now...<G> (That was fun, though.)

Matt
 
You're the one I desire
When I sigh or die or fly or
Simply break down and cry.

A
 
apl said:
Your children I will sire
I hear an angel choir
Lift me from this mire
The situation's dire
Are you for hire?
I'm no liar
(Doors used pyre)
like an electric wire
Like hobbits in the shire

I'll need the rhyming dictionary to get the two and three syllable words...
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Hobbits, I never would have made that connection! :eek: :D
 
Baby you can stroke my lyre
Light the fuse and then retire

...er, we used to joke about a trouser spire. It rhymes and you can guess what it is.

(Anyway, I used to do a lot of flying and hung about on the aviation equivalent of HR. So there was this hostess forum, and there was this hilarious thread about blokes who would fall asleep on flights and get these, er, trouser spires. :D)
 
Garry Sharp said:
Baby you can stroke my lyre
Light the fuse and then retire

...er, we used to joke about a trouser spire. It rhymes and you can guess what it is.

(Anyway, I used to do a lot of flying and hung about on the aviation equivalent of HR. So there was this hostess forum, and there was this hilarious thread about blokes who would fall asleep on flights and get these, er, trouser spires. :D)
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I can bet all the flight attendents would get a "rise" out of that! :D
 
stuck in patches of brier
smoke more and you'll get higher
take this nail out of my tire
I assure you I'm no liar
 
thane1200 said:
stuck in patches of brier
smoke more and you'll get higher
take this nail out of my tire
I assure you I'm no liar
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Now you're being silly! :p

But don't stop! :D
 
Baby you're the one I desire
When the night grows dark and cold.
You be my lover I'll be your liar
Whispering secrets left untold.

- Tanlith -

I'm Baaa'aaack! :)
 
She's the one that I desire
Every time that I walk by her.

A
 
That girl sure is a cry'er
Hook me up with a buyer
Help me spread my band's flyer
Honey I lost the remote will you turn it up higher?
 
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