interesting. good title n intro w/radiohead sample. hook? not sure if that is takin me over. the lyrics? good!!! sound a bit like . . .. aww fuck it. still sound ok - no problems. but, really -rethink the hook. why u aitn keep with the radio head sample?
It was a radiohead sample for the hook as well, might be able to add more to the hook, trying to work on hooks in general, any tips for them? Thanks for the feed and the listen.