Finally back to the lab!

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I'll give them a listen when I'm home, my work computer doesn't have speakers:eek:
 
usually up for a collab if I dig your style...I emcee myself so I can always use different folks verses to make a track hotter
 
Yo, After listening I'm kind of confused...most of what I was going to say about your work, you went and did in the Medieval Warrior Ballad. I was going to say to put more energy into your verses, they sound like you're reading them (yet trying to pass off that you aren't). Also, sometimes I've caught you saying words a certain way to make the rhyme flow together better, sometimes it works for you, sometimes it doesn't. I would definitely work on that.

P.S. not a dis
 
Fieva said:
Yo, After listening I'm kind of confused...most of what I was going to say about your work, you went and did in the Medieval Warrior Ballad. I was going to say to put more energy into your verses, they sound like you're reading them (yet trying to pass off that you aren't). Also, sometimes I've caught you saying words a certain way to make the rhyme flow together better, sometimes it works for you, sometimes it doesn't. I would definitely work on that.

P.S. not a dis
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i don't take it as a diss, :)

Everyone needs work from the majors to the minors up and down the list. Its' those who feel they don't need work who are the worst-off.

My mic presence needs work, agreed. I've always struggled in this area, and I'm working on it. Sometimes it gets bad when I don't record often, and it gets good when I've been in the lab all week long. Let me know if you'd like to collab, I always raise the bar-up for collabs and what-not. Peace!
 
gt2008 said:
i don't take it as a diss, :)

Everyone needs work from the majors to the minors up and down the list. Its' those who feel they don't need work who are the worst-off.

My mic presence needs work, agreed. I've always struggled in this area, and I'm working on it. Sometimes it gets bad when I don't record often, and it gets good when I've been in the lab all week long. Let me know if you'd like to collab, I always raise the bar-up for collabs and what-not. Peace!
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Might be up for it (got finals this week though so most of my head is there)....good that you take constructive criticism (I do too). What works for me in this area is a few things. First, I'll try to figure out how I want it to sound in my head as I'm writing my verse. Then I figure out what words of the verse I want to highlight attention to and I'll make an adlib track just for that purpose. Usually I can get the tone that I'm wanting to set in the verse.
 
Fieva said:
Might be up for it (got finals this week though so most of my head is there)....good that you take constructive criticism (I do too). What works for me in this area is a few things. First, I'll try to figure out how I want it to sound in my head as I'm writing my verse. Then I figure out what words of the verse I want to highlight attention to and I'll make an adlib track just for that purpose. Usually I can get the tone that I'm wanting to set in the verse.
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I feel you.

i'll check your work when I'm out of ........work. lol

I don't have speakers here. But I'm for sure down to throw down a collab and see how it fares. I'll be focused on mic presence for our collab if we commit. I'll bring the heat.

Focus on your studies and hit me up on myspace when you're able to give it a shot.
 
That's creepy!!!!!:eek::eek::eek::eek:


You using Reason 4 Fiev?

Nice piece of work!
 
most def cousin....i'm still getting used to some of the changes that are different from 3, but i might like them in the long run
 
I agree...the fact that he can spit on that topic without sounding fake about it gets props from me. I see potential in the man, it's just process in getting there.
 
Fieva said:
I agree...the fact that he can spit on that topic without sounding fake about it gets props from me. I see potential in the man, it's just process in getting there.
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I'm cosigning Fiev!

Maybe dudes like You, change, Gully, Killah Trackz, and BillyB, and all my other homies I missed can give him a few pointers...........I like his message! I support real ish, even if it has to be fine tuned. (He came to the right spot)
Dude, stick around and take it like a MAYNE!

Good criticism Fiev, I agree with you guidance! And I TOO see potential!!!!

The heart never lies!

PS Just so I can let other "Good" people peep your stuff try not to "Cuss" sooo much! ( That will help when you try to shop your stuff around) HUGE TURNOFF!!!!!
 
Nephew how's school?

How's yo gal?

Hittin' Skins?

Anything else new?

Just the things that Uncles ask.............:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
 
Trumpspade said:
Nephew how's school?

How's yo gal?

Hittin' Skins?

Anything else new?

Just the things that Uncles ask.............:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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Sup Unkie Unk!

Well I dont have a official "gurlfriend" anymore, BUT
Im "talkin" to my Ex's bestfriend. LOL. She's bangin too..but right
now im not really lookin to settle down Im too damn young...
in the mean time Im strappin up and smashin those cheeks:D
School- I got accepted into a few colleges but I think im gonna settle
wit Elizabeth City State University in North Carolina.
MUSIC---- DOIN BIG THANGS!!! Im gonna be in V.I.P. wit the coordinator
of Platinum Night Club on Feb.17th...theyre gonna be playin that "Yeah the Boi Stay Fresh" song (got a clean version too) The DJ scratched it up a little
so now that joint is ON POINT. On March 7th I got a performance at this
Dance Variety show in NW D.C. and on the 11th i got a radio interview wit 93.9 WKYS! Goin to the studio on thursday to do a cut.....music is ETC. lol
Work got a government job working with the Department of Budget and
Planning makin $11 a hour(good for a 17 yr. old)
In a nutshell Im lovin life right now..

OH YEA I got a 4.0 GPA too!!!
Who say u cant be book smart AND street smart:p
 
Noddy301 said:
Sup Unkie Unk!

OH YEA I got a 4.0 GPA too!!!
Who say u cant be book smart AND street smart:p
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Got me a good Job! So I know you're right!

My Son just turned 18 on Feb 3rd.....So I'm up there I guess?????????

You're doing "Big Thangs" , I'm proud of you!

I went to Saint Augustine's College in Raleigh, NC, so I know what Black Colleges are about. We use to whoop Eliz Cty butt in B-Ball.......... The CIAA was sick back then '84.
Get that education though! Honey's will flock you, but stay focused!
Make sure you stay in touch with me Man, I've been praying for you and I want to see the final product. (I don't want to just watch it on the Grammys)

My Mayne! (NOW GO TO BED!!!!!!!!)
 
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