Fight (demo...sort of...) Please give a listen.

[propman]

I wrote this song, and did a demo with my voice and piano, and thought it sounded cool like that so I left it like that. I am not sure if I am going to do it with full instrumentation but listen to this version and tell me what you think please.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=688193&songID=7212118
Thanks.

-Adam.

 

[heatmiser]

Ha!...love the lyrics . Laughed heartily by the time you got to the sprinkler part. Very clever rhyming. Musically, I dunno what you do with this. The pacing is so rapid like a lot of your stuff it is hard to imagine, but I guess you could install a whole rock band backing to this. The piano sounds kind of small maybe?

You should definitely check out early phish like their 1st album junta. I think you'd like it. A lot of similar (to me anyway) lyrical exercises and fast-paced arrangements.

 

[propman]

Ha!...love the lyrics . Laughed heartily by the time you got to the sprinkler part. Very clever rhyming. Musically, I dunno what you do with this. The pacing is so rapid like a lot of your stuff it is hard to imagine, but I guess you could install a whole rock band backing to this. The piano sounds kind of small maybe?

You should definitely check out early phish like their 1st album junta. I think you'd like it. A lot of similar (to me anyway) lyrical exercises and fast-paced arrangements.

Thanks HM!