Feedback wanted.

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Here's my second piece. New York Another instrumental track with some sampled vocals.

Using feedback from several sources regarding how my first piece Figure work sounded to them, I hope this is better.

What do you think?

 
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I hope it is ok to comment. I don't know much about music or recording.

But it sounds really good! I love the base and the vocals. Just sounds really classy.
 
I like everything except the sampled vocal - it's redundant and becomes a bit laughable after a minute or so.
The goove is pretty well held.
 
Thanks Guys. Sampled vocals? Well I can't sing and haven't got a singer :) so this was for fun.
 
I like it - but I'm also a big fan of Michael Jackson - and it definitely has that feel. If ya found someone to sing vocals over it, I think it would really swing. But I like the track - groovy. My speakers here suck, and I also know little about recording, but maybe a hint more kick? However, if on your speakers they sound thumpy, then ignore my comment based on drums. :)

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Wonderlick said:
I like it - but I'm also a big fan of Michael Jackson - and it definitely has that feel. If ya found someone to sing vocals over it, I think it would really swing. But I like the track - groovy. My speakers here suck, and I also know little about recording, but maybe a hint more kick? However, if on your speakers they sound thumpy, then ignore my comment based on drums. :)

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Thanks wonderlick. Michael Jackson, Quincy Jones, Rod Temperton were my early influences.

I posted really to get feedback on the mix on different speakers. More kick? Maybe on the 'dance version' ;)
 
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