yeah it sounds great and is Film worthy or Electronic, the end fade out was abrupt.
I don't make this kind of music so I don't know how you mixed it or anything but it makes my sound system sound great!
I could see STeely Dan,PinkFloyd doing more of this kind of synth-electronic music of perfect studio silence and notes and collages of sounds..in their day, er….decades ago? yikes.
I have kids so I know where this gap is in the music somewhat, for those years.
Ive never known anyone in the Film business but this kind of music seems like Movie scores and with Netflix and Hulu and all the streaming apps now pumping out 1000 movies a year instead of the old days of the big three pumping out 20 movies a year....
theres probably more of a Indie market for movie and film music, I would think?
the addition of YouTube visual stuff alone , is to me, a generation thing, where many BabyBoomers wont be doing Video HR stuff and the next Gen it comes easily....so the Video part was really interesting too.
Everyone will need to have a video accompanying their music, or it will be like "unfinished" or partially done, maybe?
I think a lot of the massive crowds are on drugs listening to this electro-mind music with psychedlic visuals too, so the sober elders might not get it at all....or ...have flashbacks.
its 1030am here, Im sitting in my closet with headphones on, critiquing your music as you requested. Its too early for a beer, but Im thinking it would taste good.