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Hello :)
I recorded this yesterday:https://soundcloud.com/doc-reign/kamelot-elizabeth-i-mirror
I think it sounds pretty good, currently I am trying to fix my transition into higher notes from lower notes which I am sure you can hear in the clip
I am also trying to work on mixing different vocal tracks with different instrumentals

Any feedback is appreciated so, tell me what you think :thumbs up:

 
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Made that easier for members to listen. :)

I do hear the punch in's. At least crossfade those or redo the performance.
 
As far as the singing goes, I didn't hear enough singing dynamics to really give feedback. It seemed to fit the song, but not enough for me to provide feedback.
 
jimmys69 said:
Made that easier for members to listen. :)

I do hear the punch in's. At least crossfade those or redo the performance.
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hmmm, didn't think of that.
I'll probably end up redoing it anyways
Thanks:thumbs up:

Oh, see what you did with the soundcloud link
thank you :)
 
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DM60 said:
As far as the singing goes, I didn't hear enough singing dynamics to really give feedback. It seemed to fit the song, but not enough for me to provide feedback.
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I'll have to work on that
I would like to have a more emotional performance of this song specifically
Thanks, as well :)
 
Dr.Reign said:
I'll have to work on that
I would like to have a more emotional performance of this song specifically
Thanks, as well :)
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Be careful, what you were doing wasn't necessarily bad for the song. If you listen to Lenard Cohen's Hallelujah, that is a dry mono tone vocal and it worked for that song. So, sometimes less is more. I was just making comment this particular performance was hard to provide feedback on vocals.

My opinion is, what is best for the song is the most important. Even if it is wrong but it works, then it is right.
 
DM60 said:
Be careful, what you were doing wasn't necessarily bad for the song. If you listen to Lenard Cohen's Hallelujah, that is a dry mono tone vocal and it worked for that song. So, sometimes less is more. I was just making comment this particular performance was hard to provide feedback on vocals.

My opinion is, what is best for the song is the most important. Even if it is wrong but it works, then it is right.
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Ah, I see...I will pay attention to that in the future :thumbs up:
 
I was not familiar with this song so I looked it up on YouTube and listened to it a few times. Roy Kahn gave a very emotional and dynamic performance. In your cover I can hear some of that but you provide very little dynamic variation in your performance. If that is what you were going for than that is fine but if you were trying to emulate Roy Kahn then you need to work more on your dynamics. I thought that you were a little pitchy in a couple of spots, but then again if that was the feel you were trying to communicate then that is also fine. Over all a good performance.
 
Illsidgus said:
I was not familiar with this song so I looked it up on YouTube and listened to it a few times. Roy Kahn gave a very emotional and dynamic performance. In your cover I can hear some of that but you provide very little dynamic variation in your performance. If that is what you were going for than that is fine but if you were trying to emulate Roy Kahn then you need to work more on your dynamics. I thought that you were a little pitchy in a couple of spots, but then again if that was the feel you were trying to communicate then that is also fine. Over all a good performance.
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Spot on, man
Roy Khan, definitely portrays emotion in his vocals throughout the song and that is what I hope to strive for :D
The pitch problems were mistakes on my part...
I'll continue working on it and make a full cover of this song soon enough
 
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