I think this sounds really great. The only things I would do is add some high end somewhere in the likes of 5-9k with about a .06 Q. Not a whole lot maybe 4db or so. Also, I would try less compression on the drums and more on the main buss just to tighten things up.If you try the 2buss compression more though, make sure you bump the vox up a touch to compensate. I'd be interested to hear how this sounds with those few adjustments. Oh and one more thing, check your autotune settings on the vox. It's not too terribly noticeable, but I would bring the retune fader down more towards relaxed. Im hearing a little jitteriness in the transitions between notes.