Hi all! I have learned so much from you all! Here's another one for anyone who wants to give feedback. It's a collaboration track. I did lyrics and vocals. https://soundcloud.com/user4192418/last-lulliby14-output-stereo-out
LAST LULLABY:
Hello child
Sorry I was so tired
Was looking at myself when you needed me
Take her hand
Slow it down and understand
How fast time flies by
In a breath she'll be gone
A father cries
give it all up for another try
As he looks into his daughters eyes
Just now begins to realize
he sang his last lullaby
If I could roll back time
You'd be the focus of my eyes
I'd never let you down
Just give me one more try
I swear I'll give you all my time
If i could carry you now
I'd never let you down
Summer breaks
A fathers heart aches
For the little girl he once held in his arms
passed the time
Providing what he thought was right
The years just flew by
In a flash she was gone
If I could roll back time
You'd be the focus of my eyes
I'd never let you down
Just give me one more try
I swear I'll give you all my time
If i could carry you now
I'd never let you down
LAST LULLABY:
Hello child
Sorry I was so tired
Was looking at myself when you needed me
Take her hand
Slow it down and understand
How fast time flies by
In a breath she'll be gone
A father cries
give it all up for another try
As he looks into his daughters eyes
Just now begins to realize
he sang his last lullaby
If I could roll back time
You'd be the focus of my eyes
I'd never let you down
Just give me one more try
I swear I'll give you all my time
If i could carry you now
I'd never let you down
Summer breaks
A fathers heart aches
For the little girl he once held in his arms
passed the time
Providing what he thought was right
The years just flew by
In a flash she was gone
If I could roll back time
You'd be the focus of my eyes
I'd never let you down
Just give me one more try
I swear I'll give you all my time
If i could carry you now
I'd never let you down
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