Falling

[subvibe]

Hi

Here is a new song i have done Its got a pop soul feel

Falling


Thanks for taking the time to Listen

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[Seafroggys]

I feel the vocals could probably use a simdge more clarity. Whether that's cutting out some low mids, or adding air. It doesn't have to be a lot, but that's my feeling.

I also feel the lead organ part at roughly 50 seconds could be boosted a bit. Its noticeably quieter than the lead acoustic guitar part that follows, and is kinda buried by that pad with that stereo leslie effect.