I like it Tom, you did a fine job. I listened to the first two, and I liked the first one better. I think it was because of the ambience. I'll check the third version. I like that kind of vocals, reminds me of Ric Ocasek and David Byrne, playful articulations.
BTW, to all mac users: beside using a Quicktime codec for .wma files, you can also play them with the free Microsoft Windows Media Player.
That is if you dare to install it in you mac.
Cheers, Andrés