EVERYONE!! Please listen!

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What Mistral started to comment on what was I was looking for, he started mentioning things about the actual progression of the music. That is what I am looking for, I just didn't do a good job at making that known.

I know its not complete yet, but what do you guys "see" when you listen to this? and what do you think could make it sound better Musically. I already have an idea between the very beginning part and the 'groove' part, which would be to possibly do a key change after the chokes and play a part that would build suspense and tension that would be released upon going into the Groove part.

I want to know what everyone is visualizing, cause with that I can help to shape the rest of the song. I need some sort of imagery...

one person said vampires, and another person said funerals. What do you guys think?

I am also considering reintroducing the groove part later on and ending the song with something similar to the intro but perhaps with a bit more driving drums and a hot lead playing a soaring melody.
 
darkecho said:
What Mistral started to comment on what was I was looking for, he started mentioning things about the actual progression of the music. That is what I am looking for, I just didn't do a good job at making that known.

I know its not complete yet, but what do you guys "see" when you listen to this? and what do you think could make it sound better Musically. I already have an idea between the very beginning part and the 'groove' part, which would be to possibly do a key change after the chokes and play a part that would build suspense and tension that would be released upon going into the Groove part.

I want to know what everyone is visualizing, cause with that I can help to shape the rest of the song. I need some sort of imagery...

one person said vampires, and another person said funerals. What do you guys think?

I am also considering reintroducing the groove part later on and ending the song with something similar to the intro but perhaps with a bit more driving drums and a hot lead playing a soaring melody.
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hmmm, i visualize a bunch of dorky metal-head kids banging their head for no other reason than that they think theyre supposed to. :p :p

just kidding. the structure and arrangement is pretty good.

so what role do you play in this band?
 
I like the music. I hate the drums. :(

The whole shebang needs to be a lot tighter. This is progressive music, you gotta nail it like classical music. Its a lil too sloppy right now. The concept I like and I like the keys. :cool:
 
I play the synthersizors :) most of the writing is mine with help from our lead guitarist.
 
still looks like the first page to me.

oh, just that you struck me as an overenthusiastic teenager, and my hunch was correct :P
 
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