entrance to existence, need mixing help pleasee

[scopus]

hey guys im working on this ambient track, but struggling to get a good mix esp on the dense parts, please any feedback much appriciated, thanks

Metamorphosis - ReverbNation

 

[jasgav]

interesting piece. different from what most people post I liked it. I think the vocal section could be a bit louder I couldn't understand her on the first listen.

 

[scopus]

thnks, yeh ur right imma fix that now, anyone else hear ne other adjustments to b made..please help, thnks

 

[talk midway]

i would lose the talking altogether - it's a really strong track and i thought the vox were a big detraction

 

[scopus]

i would lose the talking altogether - it's a really strong track and i thought the vox were a big detraction

i was actually thinking about doing that a while back, but someone told me to keep it, but highly considering it again now. just uploaded version without the words, i cant decide so please neone let me know with or without the words that starts at 2:25. And if u hear ne thing else that needs fix, adustments for mix..please say
thanks
words: Metamorphosis - ReverbNation
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