Elevator music...or good beat? Thoughts?

[TWProductions]

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[mewsician2]

The only thing that rings of "elevator" is the lead instrument, try a nice Larry Carlton sounding guitar.
I like the drums.

 

[ipullrank]

Yeah I mean the track is just kinda there.

It's not bad but also not good.

 

[TWProductions]

The guitar part instead of the piano or layered with it?