Good songs, I particularly liked "The First". I would say for pretty much all of the vocals to tone down the chorus/effects, especially on "The First". The intros to "Rolling Down the Hill" and "I've Got a Gun" both reminded me of something I'd hear in a TV commercial. You ever think about trying to tap into that market?
thanks for the good words rhythm, i really don't use any effects on the vocals, except for some reverb. i do copy the vox track and have it run out of phase which would explain the chorus-like effect you're hearing.
you're the 5th person to tell me about how the songs sound like songs in commercial. so, how do i tap into that market?